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Dear Dan
How are you? I was sorry to hear abot your driving test. It's terrible that you failed your driving test. Are you going to past it again?
Thanks for inviting me to visit you in England next summer. I'm really sorry, but i cann't make it. I'm  going to go in the village with my relatives next summer.
Guess what? I've been finiched reading Seller Of Dreams. I hope this book will make a movie. I recomend you read this book. I'm really mad about the book.
Have you read Persuasion? If not, i think you shoud read it too. I can land you a copy if you want to read it.
Write back soon!
love
Yana

Answer 1

Думаю, лучше так:

Dear Dan,

How are you? How it's going?

I'm so sorry that you failed your driving test. Are you going to pass it again?

Thanks for inviting me to visit you in England next summer. I'm really sorry but I can't take it. I'll go to the village with my parents next summer.

Guess what? I've been finished reading Seller of Dreams. I hope it'll be a movie by this book. I'm really crazy about the bok so I want you to read it.

Have you read Persuasion? If not, I think you should read it too. I can send you a copy if you decide to read this book.

Whire back soon!

With love,

Yana